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#1 Nighthawkbalt

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Posted 14 June 2008 - 08:11 PM

First things first, If this is in the wrong area PLEASE let me know!! I hope it is not in the wrong place.

The New Park is called In The Beggining , No not missspelled that is the name.

In The Beggining ;
The Story: A few years ago I was approatched by a gentleman , he looked kinda eerrie to me. He seemed to have the complex of someone who has been around a very,very long time. With his wrinckled face missing teeth,and lanky figure , he approatched me about me owning some land. I told him I had no knowledge of such a thing. He perssisted that it was true. So I asked him where did he get his information. He told me that I am the soul owner through family generations dating back a long, long way. So I asked him if I can check out this new item in my life. He said that it is very important that I get back with him as soon as possible. Three days later after finding out that through my family generations that I do own this land. So the old man came and seen my on the fifth day and asked me if I found out anything ,so I told him everything was true, but the land I owned I did not know where it was or anything about it. He told me not to worry he will take me there.
I whent with him,as we were traveling I asked him how big is this land. All that he told me is two hundred parcets by two hundred parcets.
I was thinking if I remember that right one parcet is about two to three acres,I thought WOW!!! thats really a big piece of land. After traveling for awhile I finally got to see this piece of land. As we aproached what looked like the main gate of this area I realized it was,it is an old amusment park. I could tell by looking at the walkway that was just barelly noticable, that it was at one time an amusment park.
After going in I decided to look around and then I noticed this :Posted Image
I was thinking WHAT IS THIS!!!! This is not a thing that you see in a park.
I asked the man what is this and really who are you? All that he could say Is that he is the care taker of this park and where such a thing had come from he had no clue. The enterance way and what is beyond it has been in this park for generations. So I ventured past the two towers and to my SURPRISE !!! I saw this staring right at me :Posted Image
You would think that I would turn tail and run??. No, it mad me stop in my tracks. I had to see it closer, much closer to find out how long it was here. Couriousity kept my mind in focus,and kept my feet in place. I had to know how long, how long it was here. I only came up with one solution: Only the moutains can tell me how long it has been here.
I decided to walk around the front and to my surprise I seen this :
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Please I thought to myself this can't be true. So I left the area after seeing what I have seen here. A few days later I knew some friends at a telivision station,and borrowed there helicopter to get a birds eye view of this area, and this is what we saw :
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The pilot was in aawww as was I . We could not believe the size of this place. We saw crypts and towers and spiders, way to many things that our minds could not comprehend. After taking this shot
we left and then I realized If this is true ,that I do own this Park I have alot of work to do on the rest of it.
For now this is the the only thing that I have seen in the park that has cought my attention. I still have alot more of the park that I have to venture in. So for now I will call it: In The Beggining.
What do you all think There is alot more to come . I will update this as often as I can.
Did you like the story that goes with this ???? Did you enjoy the Pics.???
Feel free to coment ,I would like to here something ( Good or Bad),
There definetly more to come ;)

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Posted 14 June 2008 - 08:30 PM

pretty good!...good archy and story...im not too sure about the colors you chose though...black ground and pink/redish pavement?? but other than that its actually lookin pretty good (oh and btw you did put this park in the right zone lol) can't wait to see more!

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Posted 15 June 2008 - 12:49 AM

The Pinkish walkway is only temporary . It is only to seperate things for now. The black coloring is a medifore for a coalish color from the mountain, but that along with other things will be changing in time. You have to see the rest of the park to find out why I did such coloring.
Thank you very much for the comment on th e story and work done here , You will have to wait a little longer for more of the story and pics of the park . I don't think you will be disapointed. :rolleyes: :) :thumbs:

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Posted 15 June 2008 - 03:12 AM

Sweet, I saw this at Militia, and liked it, but i didn't see the other snaps. Cool storyline too.

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Posted 15 June 2008 - 05:30 AM

Beauty. Building Wallachia...pretty cool. B)

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Posted 15 June 2008 - 12:51 PM

Thanks for the compliments guys,
Like I said before there is plenty more to come, :thumbs: .
I am working with Photo Suite to get the entire picture of the park in one shot . I had to take 4 different shots of the park . The overview of the park is huge, so I had to take 4 shots to get it all.
To fill in on some progress of the park : there are 3 enterance ways to the park : North Enterance (Main) , The east enterance ( Needs Rebuilding ), and southern enterance ( Needs Rebuilding). The East and Southern Enterances have not been used in years ( I wil get pics up soon) They are run down and need alot of work . You all won;t be dissapointed.. :wait:

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Posted 15 June 2008 - 11:34 PM

The building itself has little to no form. The only thing that makes it look somewhat good is the scenery. The building is incredibly repetitive. I would say a better form and structure would do wonders here. Some decoration other than the theming you used would help build up a more convincing atmosphere.

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Posted 16 June 2008 - 01:48 AM

Hi JJ,
Thanks for the input on this , I have thought about many variations on the design and this one is the one that sticks to me the most.
This is just the begining of th design , it wil get progrssivelly better as the park comes together.
Thanks again for your input and I will and do keep all posts to read later on. This is so that from all of the people that give me feed back , I can use them as refferences.
Thanks again . ;)

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Posted 16 June 2008 - 06:29 AM

try at least to check your screens before you post them ;) , in the thirt screen your missing a roof and you've got some white glitches.
it's kinda annoying to see such flaws in screens.

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Posted 16 June 2008 - 11:57 PM

Well your definetly right about the roof ,I am sorry about that I took the shot before I was totally finished with the building . It is in there I know that for a fact,I went over the roof before I saved the Park.
The white glitches I can't do anything about it is in the alignment of the rooves.
I have seen the same thing in everybody elses castle-masnions of this exact building materials.
The person who made this said that there where alignement problems and some glitches.
I got it knowing this and I have been working with the material, walls ,roofs to see what I can do .
So far the white glitches will have to remain. It will ave to be part of the building.
Thanks for pointing that out for me and yes the roof is fixed , just a premature picture sorry. I was happy to finish the buiding.
Thanks for your input and I will Make sure that everything is in its place before I snap the picture . Thanks again

Edited by Nighthawkbalt, 16 June 2008 - 11:59 PM.





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