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[Todd Lee]

The park is looking good, the only thing I'm not too keen on is the path choice.

[dcornel]

Thanks for the feedback. I have a new set of paths I wish I had had before starting this park. I do however like all the paths that lead to the edge of the square.

There's a VP Competition every month, so it's not really much of a deadline. After all, the more effort you put into it, and effort and detail usually means more time, it'll make it even better than it is right now.

I'm loving the park so far. The Western Canada area sounds exciting, don't forget the Calgary Stampede!

Or do. It's your park.
...I'll stop typing now.

I'm naming the fort area in the park Ft Alberta, so I'll add a Stampede themed ride I think. Good idea! Thanks.

DAVe

[dcornel]

This is a pic of the newest park area Fantasyland. It is a small version of this famous section of Disney, but that's because I want to add "Old World" as well, and don't want to get too big. More pics to follow.















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EDIT: IF YOUR SCREENSHOT IS LARGER THAN 640X480, PLEASE LINK TO IT. THANKS!

Edited by Buckeye Becky, 07 May 2007 - 10:54 PM.

[Louis!]

I have to be harsh sorry, but those first 2 screens are awful.

1. Work on your coaster layouts/coaster theming.
2. That station building has no detail and is one big block.

The other screens are loverly though. Great job on those.

[dcornel]

Thanks, I think I agree. No... I'm absolutely positive I agree. Both the building and the ride are much lower in quality than the rest. Appreciate the feedback.

[Buckeye Becky]

The park is looking good, the only thing I'm not too keen on is the path choice.

I agree. The path is too 'busy' and takes your eye away from the details of your architecture, and you don't want that. I'd use a very neutral type path throughout the park.

[dcornel]

I never thought about the paths that way. Makes sense. I'll try it.

Gwazi, how's this looking?






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This has replaced the blocky building I had originally placed there. I haven't redone the ride yet, but it is my next project in the park.

Here is the old pic:



EDIT: PLEASE LINK TO THE SCREENSHOT IF ITS LARGER THAN 640X480!!

Edited by Buckeye Becky, 08 May 2007 - 01:51 AM.

[Gwazi]

Pretty good. It's got a pretty nice Disney feel to it. In the first screen, the foliage on the left is a bit bare compared to the right. Maybe make that a little more balanced. Also, I'm not the biggest fan of that path.

Otherwise, I quite like it. Keep it up.

[RNRMontuX]

I like all the screens. They look great. I like Pirates of the Caribbean.

[dcornel]

Pretty good. It's got a pretty nice Disney feel to it. In the first screen, the foliage on the left is a bit bare compared to the right. Maybe make that a little more balanced. Also, I'm not the biggest fan of that path.

Otherwise, I quite like it. Keep it up.

You'll notice in the second frame I had actually done some work on that area between screenshots. Is that what you meant? Also, I'm gettin' a lot of neg feedback on the paths. When I'm done the whole park I'm going to add my path items et all, and I'm going to take a serious look at the paths I've installed. Thanks again for taking the time to check out the park all of you.

Hey RNRMontux (cool name by the way), I tried to "quote" your comments but couldn't, but thanks for the kind words.

Edited by dcornel, 08 May 2007 - 08:03 AM.