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[RNRMontuX]

I finally started my own park again. I haven't played the game in forever, but today I got bored and decided to start on another park. My park is called Omega, and I will have screens up shortly.







Alright here is my first few screens. It's my inverted coaster called Purgatory.






I'll have more screenshots later.

[Trainman 2000]

Layout and color looks good, but the building is too blocky IMO.

[ZeRoSkIlL]

^Waaaay too blocky. Break the roof up with multiple levels, add more windows, and layer.

Also, the landscape is flat and is one color. Use multiple land textures, and make sure the "Landscape Smoothing" box is checked in the options screen.

The flowers look out of place as well, and the different trees in the second screen need some work.

Good Luck!
- Z

[RNRMontuX]

Alright. I fixed the building, hope it looks better, I fixed the landscaping too, but it's not in this screen, I just ruffed it up a little bit and it does look better.



Here is a few buildings that I was working on, not really finished yet, and was looking for some suggestions first. Anyways, here they are.

http://img.photobuck.../Buildings1.png

EDIT: PLEASE LINK TO ANY SCREENSHOTS LARGER THAN 640X480. THANKS!

[RNRMontuX]

Edited by RNRMontuX, 27 May 2007 - 11:38 PM.

[ClockworkMyr]

I really wish I had your skills... Those buildings look superb.

[Trainman 2000]

That Pink One looks especially nice. I like the detail on the bottom

[**cjman**]

I agree, the building to the right of the screen is great, the only thing that I would suggest to make it look better is some windows in between those doors. Make sure they're a different type too, I would suggest the square windows used on the second floor of the brick building next to it.

The walls on the brick building look a little bare, try to liven them up with some balconies and windows. Also, those columns are too thick. Either replace them with something skinnier or leave them out all together.

The building on the end looks a little boring. Put some windows on the bottom floor of it and maybe put some rails bordering the flat part on the roof and it will look great.

Although I said alot, there's really not much to improve on. Looks good so far.

Edited by **cjman**, 28 May 2007 - 09:52 PM.

[Trainman 2000]

I Agree, the buildings should have some more windows.

[coastercrazy]

The buildings in the most recent screen are far better than in the first screen. I'm glad you decided to play again.

Keep it up!

/CC