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[lucas92]

^lol.

It looks like you've took some words from Google translator...
Anyway, you're not the worst french speaking person. I've seen thousands worst.

[**cjman**]

^SSSSHHHHHHHH!!!! Quick! Edit your post!!!!

Edited by **cjman**, 13 July 2007 - 11:48 AM.

[Tornado6]

For a minute there, it looked like this thread was going to be french.

[Emergo]

@ Sure: you are using very strong colours in your buildings, and I love them.
The buildings are rather huge, which does not have to be a problem, but as their froms are all rather "square" (we call that "blocky" in RCT, ) it soon looks boring. I can see that you put in a lot of effort to place details on the buildings, but I advise you to also vary with the forms of the buildings themselves, to make them more interesting.
Same goes for the straight and huge waterfalls.

Like you said, you are a beginner, and will improve on the way, just by trying.
It looks very promising now already

Lucas already gave you a link to nice parks to learn from. I would advise you also to download some of the excellent VP's (= Vacation Parks) from our VP-section.

They all will give you new scenery you might be looking for, as well as ideas how to also make larger buildings look interesting.
Mind you that you can only use this new scenery when you start a new scenario, or when you take the current park back to the scenario-editor. (I think you have not yet built any rides in this one, so that does not have to be problem).

If you want to import new scenery into a park without going back to the scenario-editor (because you are losing your built rides then), there are also possibilities to import new scenery into your game. (give a call when you need that)

keep going and having a lot of fun with it

@ to all the ones using/practising their French in this thread : it's really lovely to be able to speak your own language here, or excersising your second/third etc. on here. I know. (was tempted to throw in my French also, but that would be contradicting myself.....)
Nothing against it to do that incidentally either, but please remember this is an international site, and as we agreed on English upon the language, writing in another one means that many people cannot understand what it's going about, so they cannot react/contribute (at the best), or will feel excluded (at the worst).
Doing this also bypasses the goal of a site like this, which is sharing with and helping from each other.

So, if you want to exchange things in another language, more than a word or two, please add a translation of the main body of the reply, or use pm's.
Merci beaucoup et thanks for your understanding.

Emergo

[Sûre]

I am rather disappointed by differents parcs that site offer. There are a work on a collection of plans yet it's not very impressive save some exceptions, which are likeable ( c'est surtout l'idée d'agencement ds sa globalité qui laisse généralement cette bonne impression). Wholes parcs stay advantageous at any rate.

but as their froms are all rather "square" (we call that "blocky" in RCT, ) it soon looks boring. I can see that you put in a lot of effort to place details on the buildings, but I advise you to also vary with the forms of the buildings themselves, to make them more interesting.

Buildings i showed, rest on structures which are divergents. Clarify your think so as to i can understand better what you are saying. I have already my own think but if it's that, your think is lacking nuances. ( ça risque de poser problèmes d'ailleur le language )


I try to express my thinks in english the most possible even if sometime, i would rather to use my own language to better tell it.

http://lupiupload.de...at=4EeoQih2.BMP

http://lupiupload.de...at=QA0hFdYW.BMP

Edited by Sûre, 14 July 2007 - 12:16 AM.

[lucas92]

Hum, are you sure french is your first language? It seems you have difficulties expressing yourself in both languages... I don't want to offend you...

Screens are good, but again the buildings are detail less...

Edited by lucas92, 14 July 2007 - 01:36 AM.

[Sûre]

Not, it's just you don't understand. ( Grammaticalement, c'est correct, ou plutôt en terme de morpho-syntaxe, je pense que tu n'as pas vraiment l'assiduité nécessaire à la langue de manière à appréhender ce qui est dit convenablement. J'ai un style assez complexe, qui reflète généralement une image assez tarabiscotée pour autrui. Cependant ça reste correct^^).


Otherwise, what i put in english, it's not understanding ? If you could correct my faults. Maybe a bad choice of vocabulary ?

[lucas92]

Yeah, looks like you put french words in english. Kind of strange...

[Sûre]

I start a new park, because i have news objectifs.

[**cjman**]

Hmmm....the buildings in that screen are very colorful and cheery, I like it! However, the entrance is boring...

The screen before that are good, but I don't get the whole thing with all those building blocks in the air, the building (at least from that view) is very confusing.