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[jusmith]

Here is a little screen of a "boardwalk-ish" entrance. To me something is a little off, but I'm not sure what.

http://img258.images...ge=scr60nt0.png

[zodiac]

Try using some softer blues instead of the turquoise and red. Keep the yellow, though. Also, try to add more complexity to your buildings, the 2x2 buildings get a bit repetitive.

*runs to look at Sea World Brisbane*

[jusmith]

Thanks! I redid it a little, changed some colours, and added some other buildings:

http://img402.images...ge=scr61cs1.png

[**cjman**]

^Wow! You're really starting to improve! The only thing I would chance would be those chain link fences...they don't go with the rest of the scenery.

[coastercrazy]

^I agree, you are getting much better. I like your new buildings and they are very much improved then before. Looking forward to more.

Keep it up!

/CC

[rabbit2002]

There is not much to show yet, not enough for a topic, but here is an unfinished screen..

Edited by rabbit2002, 23 December 2007 - 02:44 PM.

[nin]

unfinished

[nin]

comments on the layout?

[**cjman**]

It's short and repetitive (loop, turn, roll, <helix> loop, turn roll) , but flows well. Make it longer and use more types of inversions and will will look great.

[nin]

unfinished-Indiana Jones Stunt Spectacular