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[rottentothecore]

whats up everyone??

well i've been hard at work for the last 4 months making this park. its the first park i've completed in years

its fantasy park thats supposed to take place in my small redneck town.

its supposed to be like one of the family fun center/adventure parks. know what i mean?


i plan on updating this every so often. so this is Visalia Adventure Park V1.0 July 6, 2007

heres a few screenshots:

http://www.freewebs....hecore/SCR1.BMP

http://www.freewebs....hecore/SCR3.BMP

http://www.freewebs....hecore/SCR4.BMP

http://www.freewebs....hecore/SCR5.BMP



and... heres the park:

http://www.freewebs....i...07-6-07.SV6

yeah? no?

Edited by rottentothecore, 06 July 2007 - 10:14 PM.

[RC14]

I like the water slides and some of the rural buildings, but some of the other architecture is a bit blockey.

[Tornado6]

It's small but I wanted to see a coaster at least in there! I give 3/10.

[nin]

Um.. I think some of the pools at the end of the slides should be a bit bigger...

[rottentothecore]

wow... thanks everyone for the feedback! i really really appreciate it.

the park is small i know... but i wanted to get something done and get something on here to get my name and abilities known a little bit.

the water slide pools should be bigger, your right!



BLOCKY? im not sure what that means...



and you can expect a coaster or two really soon.
next update... late august, early september!



3/10 is not very satisfying for me... if thats my skill level, im pretty sure i wont ever get a vacation worthy park on here (which is my goal)

ill just keep on keeping on.

thanks for the feedback! keep it coming

[lucas92]

Blocky = not enough details.

Your park is looking quite good for a non-custom scenery park! Keep it up!

[RNRMontuX]

Not bad for your first in a long time. Just keep working at it. You've got the potential I think.

[rottentothecore]

Not bad for your first in a long time. Just keep working at it. You've got the potential I think.

thank you very much!

thats encouraging

[rottentothecore]

hey guys! ive been busy with a new park, and also updating this one. i've built two coasters... and i'm deciding not to stop there! i'll be releasing an updated V.A.P here... but i need to know something.

should i post a new topic about it?

if i just posted the new version in this topic, WHO would come look at it?

would you? show of hands

[Emergo]

Well, for this park, just update with what you want to show.
That´´s the way it should be done (not opening multiple topics for the same park or subject).
As the topic will be updated, I see no reason why nobody would look at it.

For the new park, you can better open a new, own topic.

Happy building, and looking forward what you will show

Emergo